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where are you now
my love
where are you
so i can put my arms around you
againe
why did you leave me
all alone in the dark
why did you leave me
stranded in this endless sea of
pain
when can i see you
to know that you're all ok
when can i see you
and finally hold you knce again
wehre are you now
my love
where are you
so i can tell you that i love you
one last time
before you go again.

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T.A.O


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