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Bring them home Dubya.
The tide has shifted and not for the better.
Sgt. first class sent home in a letter.
Don't ask me if I agree with the war, the few the proud the brave I met a man that died in the core.
Somewhere along the way I think we lost our way, but yet and still they have to kill at the end of the day. I met another man that said he would back any decision that Dubya makes and I asked him how many lives would it take, before we see through the oil-colored glasses, look before you leap and don't let another day pass us. Red, black and blue is not about oil it's about getting you're a$$ handed to you.

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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.



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