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Your paper cuts

And doors alll shut

Bleeding through the words you say

Fucking up the games we play

Lock me here for safe keeping

Lock me here and keep me form leaving

Won't you be the one to falter?

I will sing your eulogy at the alter

Tell me the words you wish to pantomime

Show me, love, my lonely valentine

Break away from the conituity

And i will sing at your eulogy.


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misery is so beautiful


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