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you break me apart
what does one year mean to you?

you tear out my heart

what do my tears mean to you?

Cut me up

With your razorblade words

Untill i dont give a fuck

Make me bleed untill it hurts

You shouldnt be able to hurt me anymore

I will swallow your heart

And drop you to the floor

I will rip you apart

I will rip you apart

Just like you did to me

misery is so beautiful

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