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Did you know that ypur blood carries the loveliest shade of blue
Underneath your skin?
Did you know that every night, when all is quiet, i watch you
While you sleep?
But this broken lullaby, with its uneven lines will trip you off to sleep
And maybe when this melody throws off its akward notes
Finally then...would you be with me?

Speed chaser
What are you running from?
Lace your chase
Dodging your oblivious victims
Of your dodgey past
Their tattered spirits
Call out for aknowledgement

And should i just give in?
To your brokenhearted demands
Or stand here, waiting for my life to begin?
While i hold our future in my very hands


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misery is so beautiful


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