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Fatally hidden

Deadly the past

Stones and scars

Stop, I beg us

Pounding in my heart

Love me, loves me not

Breathe or not to

Nightmares and daydreams

Stop, I beg us

Fatally found

Deadly the future

Lead and powder

No pounding in your heart

Too late to run


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The following comments are for "Abuse Me Not..."
by Robinbird

This is a very good poem on abuse...fatally hidden...fatally found...stones and scars...nightmares and daydreams...of someone out to kill you...abused women often have these fears...With God's help these too shall pass and you will be free....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: November 1, 2005 )

Thanks much, many times and way too often, there is no place to go and a lack of understanding,
accompanied by self guilt..."Oh how did I ever get in this situation." We as a society have some
ground to cover yet, before noticeable changes are implimented and the intervention needed will be applied justly...Pray for our sisters, mothers and daughters, and as women, we must stand together and help on another. Leave the judging to God...

Take Care...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 1, 2005 )

The Razor
Decent poem about the razor blade of life and death and love. The simple urgencies.

Nice to see you're still around & rastlin' with the snakes.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: November 4, 2005 )

Gomar & snakes...

them damn slimy bastards, but, I quit the snake handlin', just trying to get a handle on life...
rastlin' mostly with myself, today I win...
work on tomorrow, in a little while...

Thanks for droppin' in...

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 7, 2005 )

Pen & abuse not
Pen, means much to me that you dropped in, means more the thumbs up...

Always good to hear from you...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 8, 2005 )

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