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arms of love by day

as the world turns safety fades

then all turn to claws

Robinbird


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The following comments are for "I Think That I..."
by Robinbird

I think that
This Haiku sounds just like my life with my Dr.Jekyll... Mr. Hyde ...ex husband...never knew who was going to come walking through the front door...Thank God that is all over for me and it wiil happen for you , too...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: November 1, 2005 )

Awe Kacee...
Yes, you're on spot...But, think of the beauty of a tree by day, and in a nightmare or spook of a fear those limbs can look most unenviting...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 1, 2005 )

I Think That I...
Robin,

Hi there. Yes, the spooky trees. Like the movie Poltergeist, when Carol Ann is watching the tree outside her window in the storm blow against her window with greater and greater ferocity... that scared me!

This poem is the right tone, to be sure.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: November 4, 2005 )

I think...


...this really grabbed me

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: November 4, 2005 )

GG & drsoos & trees
Hey...Pleases me to see y'all liked, what a feeling...and Lans, I want you to know all is well, I feel really good after my last storm.

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 4, 2005 )

Robin/ Out on limb...
...is exposed/vulnerable position..In life..love...

Enjoyed read,
B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 4, 2005 )

B7L and exposed...

you got it, so, I don't get it...catch my drift?
Better safe than vulnerable. At least for now...

Thanks, always...
Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 7, 2005 )





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