Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
8.5

(2 votes)


RatingRated by
7Unknown
10Unknown

You must login to vote

Pip and a pop and the zip
Pop to the pip
And the pip to the pop
But the pip isn't to the zip
Because the zip is to the pop
And the pop is to the zip...
Like a pop is to a pip
So we pip the pop and in turn..
We zip the pop with the pip

The pip and zip work together
But they don't like eachother
So when a pip sees a zip
Its pops it!
Which angers the pop
For using him to get rid of the zip
So the pop hates the pip
And the pip hates the zip
But the zip hates them all
So whats he to do?
He pips the pop...
And pops the pip..
And is all alone
And happy

Another confusing poem by myself, keep on reading my stuff and commenting and I will keep them coming to feed your hunger. I have a whole book that I plan on talking to a company about like this. Think it is good enough to even bother with? Comment back! Thanks!

~Callan aka Wicked Voodoo

------
Itachi: You lack power....do you know why?
Sasuke: W-why..?
Itachi: Because you lack it....hatred.


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Pip, Pop and Zip"
by Wicked Voodoo

Pop!
Not sure I could cope with a while book full of this! My brain would pop. (or should that be pip?)
But I digress.
It is a very odd peice, and I had to read it carefully to make sure I was following it (still not sure I managed that entirely!).
Good fun, though. I enjoyed it.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: August 17, 2002 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: