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Between the glittering stars
in the splendid universe
on cool,cheering wind
inside glowing sun
over whispering wave
on glittering dew upon a moorish land
besides a cracking river
deep down a greenish vale
and deep down my heart
my love for you is always at HOME
and so I wonder
where MINE stays to you.


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