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In my heart
I haven't really felt:
Red
Red will never be red
until
love red doesnt cause blood red
Green
Green will never be green
until
Freedom green is - being surrounded by
green grass
Blue
Blue will never be blue
until
Feeling blue is feeling the
blue skies
Yellow
Yellow will never be yellow
until
Laughter is never false like the
yellow sun
Grey
Grey is never grey
until
the grey clouds go away and show me
a grey road to walk along


Black
Black will always be black

White
White will always be white

And in my heart
My heart will always be
Black and White

Unless
I can feel
Red Love(not red blood)
Green grass
Blue skies
The Yellow sun
And a Grey road to walk on
Then only

Would
Red be red
Green be green
Blue be blue
Yellow be yellow
Grey be grey

Then only
would
my heart no longer be
Black
and
White



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