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The way you hold me when I'm sad
Helping me though I've been bad.
Asking me how my day's been
Not caring if my answers' mean.
Knowing when I need a hug
Finding meaning in my shrug.
Understanding all my deeds
Loving me and my needs.

Fixing all my wounded dreams
Ordinary as they seem
Righting wrong as you deem.

You took me in when I was battered
Owing nothing to me the shattered
Understanding what truly mattered.

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