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When youíre wronged,
Iím fair.

When youíre hurting,
I care.

When youíre insecure,
I dare.

Where are you?
Not there.


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It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.- Frank N. Furter.

--Jasmine


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The following comments are for "Where are you?"
by Jasmine

I like this
the syntax used in this poem is interesting; it adds a level of depth to the meaning of the work.

( Posted by: ESeufert [Member] On: August 16, 2002 )

I don't know...
I actually found the length worked for me. Very kewl.

( Posted by: Kambriel [Member] On: August 16, 2002 )

good work
Good description of a universal experiece.

( Posted by: josey [Member] On: August 17, 2002 )

good
It was short and to the point, which I thought was a good because you clearly conveyed a main feeling by the end. Good work.

( Posted by: pengster13 [Member] On: August 19, 2002 )





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