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Semen For The Children
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The only thing that is worse
than little children,
is little children on October 31st.
What is wrong with society,
is the thing that is making me crazy
All I know is the 5th
and I'm pleading insanity-
Parents just letting
their children go begging
door to door for candy???
Have you ever tried cyanide lollipops?
Now they come in cherry.
Cherry red like blood
These treats I made.
Be very afraid
of the sweet caramel apples
chock full of razor blades.
This year the whole neighborhood
Is going to taste me.
For in every bite
my specialty
I added a little semen
last night
Just a little part of me
...to you
Happy Halloween friends

lamemansterm$


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If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!
~L.T


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The following comments are for "Semen For The Children"
by LamemansTerms

LMT/ A perverts rant
Perhaps better suited as a 'rant?'...

As poetry, it lacks "unique perspective," for there are sociopathic individuals who think like this and act on their impulses.

Because of these twisted minds, most parents no longer allow their children to experience neighborhood trick or treating. Those days are, for most part, gone.

It is sad commentary. An original, creative poem? ..Suppose that's in eye/mind of beholder. Am glad I didn't/wouldn't think to pen it.

Should it have place on NET screen? Of course.

May I suggest a rewrite, where 'you' suck one of your special lollipops. A Freudian finish would seem fitting for this ghoulish piece.

I smell feet,
B7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 27, 2005 )

bobby bad news
ah sorry man -I agree this wasn't what it could have been but I did try to tone it down a bit for the site... I but I think it was damn original and creative but not my best-touche
LT

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: October 28, 2005 )

pedophagy
You're a mean one, Mr. Grinch! Thanks for stopping by and commenting on "Drug Wars", I like the bread box title. Shall we propose a more
sinister and devious campaign against childhood obesity via psychological terror? What fun!

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: April 3, 2006 )





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