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Often seen as something other than

How can I help ya man or when I lost ya brother

Maybe you could explain yourself againÖ


They get lost in translation

Somewhere between the Hey maybe

And always fun,

What didnít you hear me

Save me from myself this time

The toughest fight I canít fight to win,

Iím scrapping to survive
lapping at the underside again

Despite all my agravatiuon

Still I got some motivation

To destroy this shit that I have inside

It comes up and I throw it back down

And when ya think Iíve had enough

Iíll chalk one up and order another round

Intentions/my own interventions

Not exactly what I ever thought theyíd be

NOt EXACTLy what I ever intended for ME


If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!

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The following comments are for "Intentions"
by LamemansTerms


How many share these thoughts yet cannot express them succincly?

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: October 31, 2005 )

I don't know how many?---and I actually had a hard time with this the flow /everything is just ....well I suppose it's me-thx for the comment i really do appreciate that.

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: November 19, 2005 )

this one has reflection imperfection...what I
liked most is I can relate, could also say I the relation the least...

good poem...write on...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: November 19, 2005 )

Thanks Robin for the comment. Sorry I haven't been around as much as I would like, but that might not be all that of a bummer to some. But I thank you for taking the time to read my stuff. See ya

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: December 8, 2005 )

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