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what is love but a word and a phrase
what is love but like a bird in a cage
what is love but an emotion oh so like that of rage?

a constant termoil
like that of being buried deep within the soil
sufficating and frustrating to understand every word and action played

a contract sighned and dated
a contest of the rated

can be a gift from the unknown
or most of all
could be a time worth spending alone

what is love but the constent state of fear
what is love but knowing that something unknown is near
what is love but not that of an emotion but just a word, a phrase, something that isnt known by anyone alone?


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T.A.O


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The following comments are for "what is love"
by ftmthasme

Nice one...
Please continue...

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 30, 2005 )





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