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It痴 almost been seven months since I last heard from you,
But I finally got over you and found someone better.

He treats me like I need to be treated
He makes me smile and makes me feel like I知 loved by someone.

But I just want you to know that I am over you
But all I can say is that it wasn稚 even easy.

It took me six months to figure out that there is a guy out
there waiting for me,
and that you were not even close to the best since the start of you and I.

the guy that I am with now makes me feel like
I知 the only one in he痴 life.
He makes me feel like I知 really his baby girl.

He always makes me smile when I知 sad,
But all I can tell you now is that you missed out on the best thing that could have happened to you.
But all you wanted to do was play your little child games.

I said I wanted someone that will always be here by my side,
I really thought that that someone was you
But I was so wrong.

I知 so glad that I知 not with you anymore,
Because I found a new someone of my own.
He is more than a friend to me
And he tells me everything that is on his mind.

But I just wanted you to know
That you missed out on the perfect girl that could have been yours
And this is my very last good-bye

if you were to ask me how many times you were on my mind, i would say once, because you never left...

all i want to be is a gurl falling asleep in a mans arms and not caring about anything in the world ecxept how im feeling right there wit him...

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The following comments are for "One Last Thought of You"
by 16yroldpoet4life

This appears to be a letter... a person. It could remain in a journal or be mailed to said person.

Presented as a poem, begs questions: Is there a unique perspective offered reader? Is it creative and/or original? Does it move reader? Make reader think? Does it inspire?

What say you?

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 26, 2005 )

...It doesn't appear like poetry as Bobby said or maybe I don't really know much about poetry. But somehow I feel connected with what is written above.

Thanks for sharing it.



( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 27, 2005 )

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