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Last night an angel heard me cry,
He asked what is wrong,
I said I am crying because of love, hate, and sadness.
After a painful silence, he came down and looked at me with his bright and beautiful eye's
And said do not cry my love - you have the key to something very special, something deep inside.
After those words, he dissappeared


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by Puck

I really liked this, so full of hope and despair at the same time.

Well done!


( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: August 13, 2002 )

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