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how can you tell
how you truely feel about someone?
how can you tell
how you really are with someone?
how can you tell
that you really truely care?

how can you tell
who you really are inside?
how can you tell
what you truely are outside?
how can you tell
how you really truely feel inside and out?

can you ever tell anything
about you
about me
about the world around us all?

can you ever really know anything
about anything
about everything
about nothing at all?

i dont know
but i think i might care
right now


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The following comments are for "how can you tell?"
by ftmthasme

I love your poem...I think of those questions alot myself..Excellent writing.

( Posted by: Windsong [Member] On: October 23, 2005 )

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