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"Oh this is Africa here, I cannot make it to the phone right now, so please leave a message after the beep"

BEEP...

"Oh, uh hi, this is US calling. Sorry to bother you, but there is somehting I had to let you know...

Recently, I my Southern Coast got blasted by the worst hurricane season in current history. After the storms, I was left to pick up the pieces mainly by myself. No other countries rushed in to kiss my boo-boos, or offer the best band-aids money can buy.

I thought about this for awhile, and was at a loss as to why you can't do the same. I try to help you as best I can. but you don't have to mope around and wait until you get international aid to do something for yourself. I myself went through a period of dependence in my early years (I'd say from around 1776-1850)

Again sorry to bother you"

Click...






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"We did not choose when we came into this world, and we cannot choose when to leave it. The only thing left for us to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us."


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The following comments are for " US calling"
by demonsthese

Africa
You are joking right?
You can't be that ignorant.

( Posted by: robert walker [Member] On: October 23, 2005 )

communication dislocation


Obviously I disagree, but thanks for noticing. I must be an author now- I've been parodied!





( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: October 23, 2005 )

So. . .
Doy you ask bums on the street for money too?

( Posted by: jesuschriss [Member] On: October 26, 2005 )

YOU GOT A POINT
As ignorant as that writing was. You have a point.

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: November 1, 2005 )





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