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All these emotions
Running through my mind
Crashing, confusing
Don't know where to go

If I could just switch off
Make it so much easier
Flip a switch, be able to
Sleep

All these emotions
Rattling, fluttering
Like a bird in a cage

If I could just switch off
Make it so much easier
Flip a switch, be able to
Sleep

Switch off these
Emotions
Peace of mind
To be
Free


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The following comments are for "Switch Off"
by Rys

Nice rhythm
T'was good, Rys.

I like the device you employed at the end, it ends abruptly like someone flicked a switch.

I think this is something that everyone has been able to relate to at some point in their lives.

Good Job, my Friend!

--Jasmine

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: August 12, 2002 )





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