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i feel torn apart from that happy world that i was in,
for it feels like centuries ago,
but it was only two days ago that i heard the greatest
news about my loving sister...

i dont know what path i should walk the rest of my life,
i dont know who i should turn to
to tell them how i feel about everything...

i can no longer look at these smiling faces that are all around me,
because it sems like i cant smile back at them...
i feel so alone,
with no one by my side to smile at me,
and have them tell me that they love me like it used to be...

im loosing all the peopls that i care about in life,
one by one,
and day by day...
everyone is leaving me cold
how i feel so alone.
im supposed to be bold,
but i am unable to hold
hold all these different feelings inside anymore.
i just cant take this anymore!

i want to be free from all this drama that surrounds me everyday,
and i dont want to cry anymore.
i dont want to feel so empty inside,
everything is just rushing in my mind!

please, someone help me out of this big, dark hole!!

if you were to ask me how many times you were on my mind, i would say once, because you never left...

all i want to be is a gurl falling asleep in a mans arms and not caring about anything in the world ecxept how im feeling right there wit him...

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The following comments are for "I Am Unhappy; and I Have No Clue Why"
by 16yroldpoet4life

Kimberly/Welcome to Lit
Teenage angst. We all go through it. You are not alone. Keep putting pen to paper. Believe me, you'll look back at your journals..and smile/laugh/cry...Date everything. Save it all.

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Welcome to Lit.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 22, 2005 )

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