Students with Green Feet
by Persephone (Member) - published: October 20, 2005
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Untie your shoe
Show us your green feet
The students laugh cause
They can’t keep up
So hope for a new day
One without the smell of fast food
Or the word “ass”
When you’ve already said you
Must ask first, always first
Because bastards don’t matter
So ask anyways
You’ve got some good stuff going here
Please, tell me your story again

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The following comments are for "Students with Green Feet"
by Persephone

Trick or treat...
..smell our feet...

Persephone- Interesting read.

A few little things, like:(shoe/foot..shoes/feet)..No big deal..

It couldn't hurt to break into a few stanzas.

Enjoyed,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 20, 2005 )

Don't know for sure
...but I think the shoe/feet was on purpose. Maybe not but it's good work. A great title too, totally made me want to find out what this one was about.

I think Bobby is on to something though. Give us a few more stanzas on this one, you left me hanging wondering more about these green feet.

~Jessica

( Posted by: Jessicanm [Member] On: December 9, 2005 )

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