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The razor runs across your wrist, at the place of our last tryst.
Blood falling red, red as your lips, dissipating into mist,
And you wonder if you’ll be missed.

How could I be so stupid, what was going through my mind?
It was plain to see, you were showing all the signs.
Maybe there’s an ever after, maybe there’s some place I can find,
Maybe we can be together in the after life.

I remember how you told me you’d marry me someday,
Even though it was impossibility, you said we’d find a way,
And I remember your mother crying, when she told me you were dying,
I made believe she was lying, though I knew that it was true,
It was such a stupid thing of you to do.

How could I be so stupid, what was going through my mind?
It was plain to see, you were showing all the signs.
Maybe there’s an ever after, maybe there’s some place I can find,
Maybe we can be together in the after life.

Drip drip. The blood, it falls, as I ran through those hospital halls,
I ran faster than I knew I could, and thought of all the things I should
Have done, but didn’t do, as I came to the bed and held on to you,
And I, saw your eyes, meet mine, look into them one last time,
And I, squeezed hard, as I prayed to god, to find a way -- too late.
Then the beeping dies, and with it you did too,
What a stupid thing of you to do.

How could you be so stupid, what was going through your mind?
Couldn’t you tell that I loved you? I only told you all the time.
So I pray that there’s an ever after, cause I’m going to it too,
I would never let death get between me and you.

The razor runs across my wrist, I’m at the place of our last tryst,
Blood’s falling red, red as your lips, dissipating into mist,
And you wondered if you’d be missed.


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The following comments are for "Razor Reflections"
by DCHXIII

Razor Refections&Fallen Angel
very sad indeed, intense and truly hope just poetic sadness...to me, just learning, I feel
this to be written well and from the heart, as if you may know someone that has experienced such. If you just wrote this, just because, you did a good job, anyway...

I read Fallen Angel, I really liked it...looking forward to reading more of your writes...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: October 21, 2005 )





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