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You are my Shepherd and my total supply
It is by You that I live or I die
I can't eat unless You feed me with Yourself
I can't drink unless You give me from Your well
I can't breathe unless You come into me as air
I can't see unless You cause me to stare
I can't hear unless You make a sound
I can't walk unless You are my ground
I can't do anything without Your provocation
Only in dependence do I find emancipation
I can't speak to You unless You give me the words
I can't come to You unless You draw me first
I can't serve You unless You've done the deed
I can't love You unless You put Your love in me
I can't follow You unless You take me by the hand
I can't know You unless You make me understand
I can't give You more than what You've given me
I only want more so more You can recieve


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The following comments are for "Dependence"
by SeanKealey

My favorite version of Psalm 23
This helps me read between the lines again. Remember so long ago when we learned to do that? To read what was being said beyond the words. Can't wait to read what's next.

( Posted by: Tamir [Member] On: October 20, 2005 )





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