Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
10Tumbleweed

You must login to vote

Poet, wrap words
around the essence of who I am.
Let them sink in and
carry you through
my veins,
for Iím addicted.

I need a calculated dose of
any left over thoughts,
even insignificant
petty casual communication.
Anything of you will do.
I ask for it gently,
even slowly,
for too much at once
will suffocate me.


Wait let me think this through...

Overcome in your presence.
Spent.
Exhausted.
Gasping for air sounds amazing.


I take it back.


Give yourself to me,
entirely and all at once.
Make me beg, I'll plead with you
like a drunk for his booze.
Itíll be a sweet, welcomed death.
So breathe hard,
force feed me you.
Let me overdose.
May your words live their last moments
catering to my demise.


------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Bittersweet Death..."
by nae411

Nae/ POET without O ...
..is just pet.

You, once again, make reading poem a sensual experience...That can't be a bad thing...

Perhaps a comma following "Poet," to start piece?

Enjoyed read,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 18, 2005 )

Bobby's sensual experience
Bobby, thank you. Poetry is very sensual to me. Thank you for hearing loud and clear! Missed being here.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 18, 2005 )

Dear Nae...
You touched me, this is very intense...
I'm beginning to learn how to place words.

This is one of your writes, that is a pleasure,
as so many have been...

Keep up the great work.

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: October 18, 2005 )

Fairplay, and Robinbird
Eric you are so funny! Yes Meatloaf would not be to happy to share his words without recognition, lol.

Robinbird, thank you so much. I am so happy you enjoyed.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 19, 2005 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: