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ones no longer with us
ever more apart of us
never will their forms be forgotten
always will their beings be here
times spent with them
short but sweet they were
lived long and happy times
now replaced
by lonely and disspared times
but with lonelyness and disspare
comes the hope and promise
of better times to come
so here be the better times
even if sertin beings,
special forms are not aroused from a slubmer not yet completly fullfilled to brink.
no words to describe
the ones no longer physical
but rememberal
no words to tell the inpact left behind.
but these ones shall never die as long as you have them always
close by.


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