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Like cool wetness does hot parched earth
Like mother’s milk does baby at birth
In ways that defy
My understanding do I
Wanna do you
Someway
To display
Your worth

How can I open your eyes to receive
Anguish immortal, denied a reprieve
How can I set you
Free and then let you
Run once more
To sorrow
And on the ‘morrow
Be deceived

Can I do you like keys that sing of liberty?
Their song brings the dawn to a captive set free
Take my hand and we’ll run
Into an unbearable sun
I wanna do you
Like this
In a tryst
So you’ll see

How a prism does light by releasing its rays
Trapped until handled, fanned out for display
Such secrets hide within
Where true beauty begins
With facets of splendor
That endlessly render
Your myriad unknown ways

---

Because of Jennifer, of who this is merely a shadow.


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The following comments are for "How I Wanna Do You"
by Tamir

WOW Tamir!!!!!!!
Um....whew, this is delicious reading. Romantic, sounds like you really know what you want to do..
you did it in your writing. This is an excellent write in my opinion.

Each phrase is good. I find the title may be too weak for the body, but that is ok. It is all about how you want to do.......what you wanna do.

Pleased to have read you,
Darlene :)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: October 14, 2005 )

The first stanza is
extremely powerful Excellent metaphors. But maybe I would make it shorter. I like the rays from the prism, but the explanation was too long.

Wonderful.

( Posted by: greatsmile [Member] On: October 14, 2005 )





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