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The things you do
The games you play
confuse me completely
I'm not going to stay.
If you want me, you want me
if you don't, you don't
I'm not going to be here forever
you may think that but I won't.
So i guess this is it
I'm tired of the game
you had so many chances
but you always stayed the same
we've been through so much
and thats not a lie
I will always miss you
who knows, i may even cry
maybe one day you'll realize what you lost
but it will be to late
then, you my friend, will be paying the cost


The following comments are for "Gone"
by summersweety574

hheya summersweety, i liked the directness, i made me feel like you'll never be hurt.

( Posted by: namelessdragoon [Member] On: October 17, 2005 )

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