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"Zen"

He knew that she dug the metaphysical.
Naked in his apartment's kitchenette,
he watched her slide her jeans on.
He told her, you're my Nirvana.
She smiled.
He reached enlightenment before the door slammed shut.

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"Imperious, choleric, irascible, extreme in everything, with a dissolute imagination the like of which has never been seen... there you have me in a nutshell, and kill me again or take me as I am, for I shall not change."

From his Last Will & Testament, Marquis de Sade


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by strangedaze

SD's Kitchenette Meditations
Andrew- It's cool when they just smile.

Transcend on,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 15, 2005 )

meditations
Hi Andrew-
wondering if there was any yoga involved? Fun write, and I got a chuckle out of Bobby's comment as well- nirvana indeed ;)

Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: October 15, 2005 )

Retarded
I freakin' deleted this and yet here it is hahaha. Thanks for the comments, you kinky lit studs.

SD andrew TerrenceUrnip

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: October 15, 2005 )

deleted poetry!
Andrew, Androo, Andrude...

you're in the poetry section, thank god.

but I almost hate it when you do that because you make me look bad with your sexy-good poems.

you bastard.

i love you.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: October 16, 2005 )

Lans and friends...
I'm not going to lie - this poem fell short of my lofty expectations. However, I'm really hung over and for the first time I woke wanting to vomit everywhere. Just take my mind off of it....

by the by, I did a blog thing on lit. When it comes up, check it out. I'll fill in the details, if you're interested.

Dru

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: October 16, 2005 )





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