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They are love.
True love.
They are one when in each otherís arms
The laughter, the tears
The joy, the pain
All together in this love

Their love is so unique
Others donít understand
They barely understand
Themselves

But he finds someone new
And true love can only hope
For happiness and love so pure
She tells him so
As he walks out the door

Their love is so unique
Strong enough to let go
Honest enough to let go
Pure enough to let go

She smiles strongly
Honestly, in her heart, wishing him
Joy, happiness, love
As the door closes
Her tears fall
The flood carries away her sorrows
Leaving only the joy known
of being truly loved.



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The following comments are for "Of Being Loved"
by leftylink

Nice poem..
I liked this one too. Eric, ur comment has made me read so many poems and comment too. Well, this time around I have commented more than posting my works.

True love is everything..Keep writing.

Bye,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 13, 2005 )

The Flood
Jen;
Nice one here,I enjoyed the read very much. True love is out there! But I want be searching too soon if I were you...inner self needs to heal first.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 13, 2005 )

truly loved
the last stanza was great. the hardest thing to do is let someone go when you still love them and they, in some way, still love you. it's like a slow death. in the end, the joy from knowing that there was love and you were loved is what ultimately gets you through the loss, and helps you love the next one. very nice poem. congrats

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: October 25, 2005 )

thank you all
i am blessed to have been truly loved and it gives me the courage to look forward to it again.

( Posted by: leftylink [Member] On: October 29, 2005 )

Of Being Loved
Beautiful,
a blessing...
true love :)

Namaste

( Posted by: Svabhava [Member] On: March 20, 2006 )

of being loved
Dear Jen, a very insightful poem, as well as
philosophical- your thoughts do you credit.
bonnie

( Posted by: bonrudo47 [Member] On: March 20, 2006 )





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