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dark and lovely
light and deadly
your kiss kills me
lick me lusious
touch me precious
i love when your tongue travels
from my neck, way past my navel
you make me feel so warm form the inside out
so lay down, and tell me what you're all about
tell me about our passion and how it can take you away
and like the wind, flows over you, this can't be another game we play
please let your fingertips run over my smooth skin
untill i cant take it anymore and we can begin
finnally my life begins

------
misery is so beautiful


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The following comments are for "passion like the wind"
by ambellina

passion/ambellina
dark and lovely
light and deadly
your kiss could kill me
lick me luscious
touch me precious

like when your tongue travels
from my neck past my navel
you stir my soul
so warm inside and out
lay down beside me and show me
what you're all about
tell me of our passion and how
it can take us away
like the wind flowing over me
this can't be another game you play
please let your fingertips stir my skin
until I can't take it anymore...

like the flowing of the wind
comeing together, our life begins.


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ambellina, I liked this poem with it's taste of
eroticism...and I never rewrite anyones work,
please don't be offended, I'm just a person
trying to figure out how to write...

It's your poem, and I liked the idea...
Write on!

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: October 14, 2005 )

passion
Yes, I too liked this poem. Keep writing and posting.

Bye,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 16, 2005 )





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