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do you see the solitary tree
reaching out for the forest
alone it stands
among the short, shorn grass
its spirit calls out for attention
and yet you dont have the heart
to climb its stretching branches
but ony stand by and watch it fall apart

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misery is so beautiful


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The following comments are for "Your heart falls apart"
by ambellina

So sad..
I really felt sad for that solitary tree. Thanks a lot for posting the same. I really liked this one. Hope to read more.

Bye,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 13, 2005 )

Me 2!
hi ambellina, i liked this one a lot to, especially the last part
"and yet you dont have the heart
to climb its stretching branches
but ony stand by and watch it fall apart"
The piece is very short and simple but it holds so much and gives so much. thanks for sharing.


( Posted by: namelessdragoon [Member] On: October 17, 2005 )





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