Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(1 votes)

RatingRated by

You must login to vote

--Early latter morning rush--

Could hear through closed windows
finch and turkeys
searching breakfast
before dawn.
Drink coffee
stare at computer screen
trying to finish bad poem.
In disgust
put shoes on
go outside
pretend to ignore
morning traffic
become entranced
watching mule deer
getting ready to cross
Highway 49.

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

Related Items


The following comments are for "Early latter morning rush"
by bhagwandave

The Highlights of Poetry
often...with bad poetry
it's obscurity...
is the highlight

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 30, 2016 )

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.