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Lurking shadows tell

Trembling awake and sleeping

Feels like he's paroled

~Robinbird~


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The following comments are for "EVIL Paroled..."
by Robinbird

Evil!
Robin;
Great Haiku! Be without fear in the face of your enemies...


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 10, 2005 )

Evil, Jeannie's advice
I love this comment, "Be without fear in the face of your enemies"...I really needed to here this and I'll think of these words when I face the enemy...

Thanks so very much...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: October 10, 2005 )

Evil..
Maintain the eye contact with ur enemy as u are his / her equal. That's what I feel.

It was a wonderful haiku! Thanks for posting the same.

Bye,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 13, 2005 )





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