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to hold someone that loves you is the gratest gift you could ever have.

to miss someone you love is the gratest pain you will ever feel.

to be reminded of the loves that no longer walk this earth is both pain and pleasure
in both good times and bad.

to know that the ones who love you will never hurt you is the only trust you can ever have.

to know that you'll never have to worry again is a major relief.


and for the ones who may read this FYI i know there are miss spellings on this and other works i have done. i am dislexick and if you have a problem with that tuff shit. i dont want to spell check anything and i dont have to. love me for who i am not how i spell. :P


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The following comments are for "cant get you off my mind!"
by ftmthasme

Holding someone..
...u love with love and not by force is the greatest achievement in itself. Thanks for posting the same.



( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: October 13, 2005 )

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