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Angry Youth....
bound and determined
all with something to prove.
Did you lose someone you love?
What happened to you inside?
It isnít really that tough.
When was the last time you cried?
would you believe there is something out there for everyone?
That little thing that sets you apart, that little thing that makes you number 1.
Patience really is a virtue.
And I know,
no matter how many times I tell you,
youíve got to make it on your own.
All the opportunities that were given
and second chances that were blown.
Learn from your mistakes,
and take your turn
when your given a break.
I see so much of myself in you.
and really too soon
before you know it
you wont be such an
Angry Youth.....
and then
you'll wonder where your youth went.


If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!

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