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i laid across the velvet sky
where my skin touches
the sun kissed edges
as your warm flows freely
burning me with desire

butterfly fingers
roaming gently
around the hidden
nooks and alleys
stroking my need
to feel you beside me

this close proximity
between your hunger
and my longing
dawns the insurgency
in our voices
under the moonlit heavens

let me drown in your eyes
burn me in the sky
as we chase this urgency
running faster and deeper
plunging into the stillness of the night
until the fervor of this melancholy dies

the aftermath of this rhythmic dance
lets me drift to a far away land
that only the sound
from your chocolate lips
reminds me of vivid scenes
on the floorboard attic

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