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like smoke vanishing into the clouds
like fire into open air
my hopes melt in day light
just like vanishing shadows
when the sun goes...goes!

the hope of being with you
is like vanishing shadows
giving way in a clear day light
melting my heart beyond bear
ohh! my love
dont let our love perish
just like vanishing shadows!

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csam


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