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from the day
that we are born
we are enslaved
an invisible chain
wrapped around our neck
many people are unaware
while others
have only a vague idea
as we grow older
the chain tightens
our death is slow
Watches, calendars, and PDAs
are among the slaver's tools
but slowly
we are becoming aware
of our enslavement
use his tools against him
and turn
the slaver into the the enslaved
on that day
we take a step
towards true freedom

if the pen is mighter then the sword then the word processer must be mighter then the missile

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The following comments are for "Modern slavery"
by johntellall

Modern Slaves
Great title, and I got sucked into your words. Enjoyed, hope to read more of you.


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 28, 2005 )

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