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--anyone care--

You get blamed
for much you've not done
does anyone care?
No any scapegoat will do
only proof accepted
physical evidence
you were a thousand miles
away.





By: David E. Howerton


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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The following comments are for "anyone care"
by bhagwandave

welldone
the work is impressive especially the first three lines,they show dejection and need for change clealy,and the symbolism-scapegoat is so nice but there is no connection between fourth and fifth lines you should have thought more on the way to connect them.

( Posted by: chriss [Member] On: October 6, 2005 )





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