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Can't break these chains
They're too strong
Can't keep the cold
From seeping into my heart
Even though I'm trying

Can't turn around
Can't back down
Won't turn away
It never works anyway

'Cause you can see
The better part of me
Even when I can't
And you can take it all away
And hold it within
Until I'm strong enough again

All I needed was someone
To watch my back and pick me up
Can't go back now
Don't even know how
To chase away the feelings
I hold inside this head

But I know
You'll be there
Until I'm strong enough again



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The following comments are for "Strong Enough Again"
by Rys

Strong enough...
Powerful concept here, Rys.
Kind of a dependant independance.
I liked this alot.
Go Girl!

--Jasmine

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: August 9, 2002 )

Heh
Thanks!
Oh, and thanks Beckett, for bugging me enough to post something. *L*
*heads off to watch Signs*

( Posted by: Rys [Member] On: August 9, 2002 )

hi there
hi,

I like it alot, it has so much pain, but on the other hand so much hope.
Would love to hear more from you!

nickai

( Posted by: puck [Member] On: August 16, 2002 )

Interesting
Rys,

One problem I always have with lyrics is not knowing, what kind of music will accompany them. So I love the lyrics, I just wish I could hear them.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: September 23, 2002 )

Dras-
I wish I knew too :p

It'd probably do better in poetry, huh?

~Rys

( Posted by: Rys [Member] On: September 23, 2002 )

Perhaps
Rys,

This may have been better as poetry, because it doesn't feel as if it had been broken up into verses...no matter what it is, I like it! Alot!

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: September 23, 2002 )





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