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Honrise


The kitchen window framed her right
within a bloom of morning light
From her robe an aura shined
in terry glow she was outlined
She turned with coffee in each hand
and surely caught me in dreamland
where in that soundless sunny spot
my tongue found her honey pot






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The following comments are for "Honrise"
by Flonigus

very cool poem...
and erotic i might add.

john. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: October 3, 2005 )

nice one
I agree. This piece is as sweet as this honey and as hot as that coffee!

( Posted by: poliarch [Member] On: October 4, 2005 )

original image
finally found this work that touched off my Flonigus Redux

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 15, 2011 )





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