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i see you every day

and i don't know what to say

to let you know how i feel

let you know that my feelings are real

that i want to hold you near

and whisper into your ear

all that is going on inside

the feelings i don't want to hide

but each day i shove the feellings aside

and keep this undeclared love

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NICHOLETTE FILI


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