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caress me with your eyes
where I can feel the sensations
let me swim in the ocean
drown in pure emotions

release me in my dreams
let me see the sky of temptation
bury all this lies
let me touch the naked sky

light the flame
burn me, release me
light the flame
let the heat flow to you

touch me with your eyes
let me feel the fire
undress me with the truth
hold me in your blind side

light the flame
burn me down
light the flame
let the ashes fall into your hand

burn all my fears
release all my tears
tomorrow will be another
a story to burn forever



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The following comments are for "Light the Flame"
by yellowpaintedsky

It takes a lot of courage...
to give yourself so completely and limitlessly to another. But then it takes a whole lot more to find that endlessness within you with such clarity that it can written so explicitly.

( Posted by: Tamir [Member] On: October 2, 2005 )





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