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nakaw at pahapyaw
ang mga sandali,

simple at madiskarte
ang mga pagtanaw,

may ngiti at kiliting
dulot sa aking labi

ang masilayan
kahit sandali

ang iyong mukhang
laging nakangiti

kailan at saan
kaya ito mauulit

ang makasabay ka
sa pulang jeepney




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