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Author's Note:
It isn't as obvious as one might think, who is for whom


I say a gift of essential juice

Urge and heave beneath moan or music

Let language soar the shot and summer
moon petal milk
Scream
Sordid Spray
in drunk love
Frantic timing
bedding
Saddness
aching
Weak symphony...
Crushed


Author's Note:
and the preditor whispered in my ear "and don't worry, you won't get any better the second time, you've served your purpose." Then she walked away.


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"All computers are garbage. They only contain answers." ~ Pablo Picasso


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