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A Dream of Aggregation

In now silent nights,
I lay encased in sorrow.
The rain palpates windows,
In efforts to peek inside.
I am isolate,
My heart miles away.
A better place,
In your chartreuse eyes,
They fill my dreams
Like dark finds every corner.
Absence may make fond
What is also broken,
But it fails to cohere
A repaired sum of the parts.
Until I taste your kiss,
My heart remains as isó
Thought deny it not,
Your care has been exquisite.
However, not your gentle voice,
Nor your sweet picture in my frame,
Could dispel, restore, reconstruct,
What only the caress, the sight,
The touch, the lips, of you
Before me can mend.
I can hardly wait
To be whole again.



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The following comments are for "A Dream of Aggregation"
by Virtex

aggregation - good word
How happy I am for having felt the feelings you express here, and to know that those feelings have been felt about me as well.

But the most perfect of all is to be experiencing those things in the here-and-now.

This was a very moving piece.

In line 17, did you mean to write "though"?

Regards,

Felicia

line 17

( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )





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