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Clear Images...

The Lord wakes me up
Sitting on the edge of my bed
With the moon shining so bright
There on the wall, is a silhouette
Of a shapely woman's body

I'm sitting, quietly, and observing
The stillness of this room; peaceful
Arising, walking toward my computer
In the chair, saying, Lord, what will thou
Have me to write? or Lord, you want
Me to pull one of my old poems
That you gave me years ago


For the Lord to give me an answer
I'm sitting quietly, and observing
The moon shines brightly in my room
Opening my tablet, full of words
With clear images and gently flowing lines


"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~

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The following comments are for "Clear Images"

He does seem to like the wee hours. For years I would wake up at 3:00am with thoughts of people who needed prayers. The lives we saw changed in those days!


( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

Thank you again; You know here lately Felicia that is all I do. Seems like God gets me up and down on my knees I am praying for someone, even if it is an neighbor. God has us praying for the ones who even mistreat,or is evil toward us; He blesses us when we blesses others.

Felicia I can tell that You know what I mean, especially early in the wee hours of the am.



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

i wish i could get women out of bed and on their knees at 3 in the morning

( Posted by: ilichvladikov [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

Bad form for a guy who's aim it is to garner respect in the community. Really bad form. There are other places to say this kind of crappola, ok?


( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: September 28, 2005 )

Women? You suppose to have one wife, and you would not have this problem. Something is terribly wrong. Please reframe from putting that kind of talk on my work. Thank you for commenting though.

Thanks a million, You are very loving and kind.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 28, 2005 )

Hey Jennie,
I've been smilin' since I talked to you last...I really enjoyed this especially the smiles, and the gentle faith, that has brought them to me even in these most tryin' times...oh I still have some moments of tears they dont last long just moment's...I tried your email, guess my setting on this friend computer are to high, I'll go through his, I slept 16hrs today, It was a glorios reat, I discovered some really interesting new developments to help me out for my son, and the right authority's are praying right with me, it's just all so good, seems as if I have grayed over night, I don't son, the last day I seen him last Friday, was so happy, he told me as he was leaving for school, mama, you're not sad anymore, I love you and if it was'nt for you I would not be he was blowing me kisses and kisses and kisses...good thoughts...I don't know if I told you, but I know and you have and have heard "that scared me to death," well Jeannie, "I got scared to life"... the sky is bluer, the night is darker and lighter, and people are more interesting and I love to watch them and talk to them and kid's, kid's, kid's they love, and love and give so unconditinally...I'll hittin' the email, maybe you can get me that special message soon...

lot's of love...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: September 29, 2005 )

Thanks for the comment; I have been so busy lately, and did not have time to respond. Working on two novels and it is a headache for sure.

Hold on to your faith, God is letting you go through this, but He is there with you. He is just setting you up for better and bigger blessings. He just wants to see if you will still praise Him even in tough times. He loves you child and is encamping Angels all around you and your family. But you hold stedfast to His word and His promises.

Remember Robin, you are not alone in this. It may seems that way, but you are not.,He will make you stronger and stronger. I love you, But God loves you best.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 4, 2005 )

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