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I found this to be of abuse; Is it? The way I read it as if a child is being violated by verbal language, emotional or physical abuse. Thanks for a terrific write. Very emotional too.

Thanks Chris for rating my work, You are a true poet who loves to read everyone work here. God Bless you and Your Family...

Blessings Always,

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

Funny how 11 words can make such an impact...don't you think?

Powerful and it for 15 solid minutes...


( Posted by: Wilcobaby [Member] On: September 28, 2005 )

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