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Awe, Hummm... She's back,
But, she don't want to fight,
She just wants to right.

Don't you want to know the thing's she's seen?
You know it's good or bad...
Somethings, pray you've never had.

Thank Your God...

(Viper's, FBI, Jail, Gangrene, Insanity, Utility Poles, HIV, Crack Ho's)

Haven't graced your days.

I see with eye's of clarity,
Prayer's answered, purpose revealed,
My life, finally is healed.
There is a God, this I know...
There is a Hell, my life did show.

From bad, came good and
Through justice, came justness.

Long awaited, but I survived
To stop the cycle of living demise.
Prayer's answered and purpose revealed...
I Thank my God I'm finally healed.

There is a child or children I'll say,
That need my help for future day's...
The system will work with her blind removed,
She'll balance the scales with evidence proved.

Save the children, save them now...
Through my experience, I'll show you how.
We do it now, we don't delay,
Fore, if we wait tomorrow we'll pay.

We're going to grow old...
They're going to grow up...

Can you see?

Seeing is Loving...

I love my great-grand-children.


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The following comments are for "She's Back"
by Robinbird

Glad to have you back...and writing this looks like you've gone through alot ...I'm with you ...I never like to get caught up in political and religious discussions ...I don't feel I know enough about either to voice my opinion...
Somebody has to save the children...that seems to be where your heart is...God Bless...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 24, 2005 )

Robin - welcome
Welcome back... I'd love to see you post a bio.


( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: September 26, 2005 )

Dear Kacee & Felicia...
I had decided to go back to school, to start Oct 15, for criminal investigations, specializing in forensic put the bad people away that are destroying minds, souls and bodys, lives, etc. of young people, they are our future, and we will grow old if we live long enough and some of us will, we need their precious mind's but they need them more and they are innocent, I'll say even this much many people are so good natured they are innocent souls into a good 40, I know one.

Recently, I went trough a life and mind altering experience. Nearly cost me my physical life and I don't want to die. It changed my life, completely, it was like getting shock treatments without the electrodes and much more effective.
(never had any, but, I know in my heart). On Sept 12, I was in an car accident, my sister,
had an insanity attack due to alcohol intoxication at a level of BAC .26, Iwas attempting to drive to my home to get my son of seven after school, myself, not drunk, nor close to, managed to hold the car in a position while her foot atop of mine on the gas and her atop me forceing the steering wheel irratically, somehow with one hand I spun out and rested the car against a guide wire and bumped a utility pole...
In fight/flight I jumped out of the car and ran backward away from the busy highway, I feared someone would freak out and hit the car, she is pinned under the air bag foot over the console when the cops got there. Inevitably they put us both in jail due to the nature of the wreck and because looks as if we are "fighting", in essense I'm defending...doesn't matter to the cops, not at the time. They won't allow us to make a phone call for 12 hours, thus my crack head father of my son takes the opportunity to use this to get temporary custody of my son via DHR, although my landlord, competent is watching him, thinking maybe I've had car trouble (of the worst kind) I get out of jail the next day and get my son back, but I had been also charged with reckless endangerment, of my son....

Okay things are going great, the state is involved and helping me and my son, whom has recently been diagnosed with dyslexia and possibly ADHD, myself upset about, but, he was getting his needs met by the state as well as special home visits through the local mental health center, all this great wonderful care we both needed, unbelievable...Even at school, a great little school, his class of only 13 students, he was getting special care due to his dyslexia...Now comes the sad part, this past Friday, he didn't get off the bus, I'm devastated, no one called me...his father came with a court order giving him temporary custody, for Ex Parte Relief, this means he got a lawyer and is stupid, to have this you have to show in fact that the child is in probable immediate irreparable danger of injury, in fact...charges are allegations not his father has been convicted of domestic violence against me 2 times...he recently went through drug treatment for crack cocaine addiction, there is a law section code 30-3-131 Presumption against perpetrator of reads he cannot have custody and judge MUST take such into account, etc.

30-3-132 Factors for court consideration
other relating matters judge MUST take into account as to well being of child and impact due to the perp

30-3-133Presumtion in favor of non violent parent
again judge MUST etc.

This is about money for one, father is 7500.00 behind on child support at a mear 56.00 per week started in 2001. Furthermore, my son will draw a 579.00 disability check til the dyslexia or ADHD is better.

And I could go on...I will I need prayer's for son. He is in crack town...I filed a motion with the court today with evidence proved, I hope they realize, this woman is no dummy, and she loves her child, and I know just more than a little about the law...and my oldest daughter is a cop and my neice works for the FBI, another thing, I've missed ya'll and I really did enjoy having ya'll in my life and I hope I can come back on a regular basis soon...and I also learned much about life here on this site, the most life I'd had in me in a long time.

Everybody take care and TRY and help each other out, and try and help out the newby's...they really want us to be there, just a little bit...And as Bobby told me once, it's great to be diverse, and it is...

Thanks Kacee and Felicia, see ya'll soon...
write on!

Hey, I'll tell ya'll about the rest of that other stuff later, things must settle down I need some rest...Be good...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

She's Back
I throughly enjoyed this. The sixth stanza, was something I lived through.
"There is a hell, my life did show"

I am sorry about your sister, God will keep her strong. Robin read Psalms 27 every day until you are well with it. I am keeping you and your family in prayer. Email me @ I want to send you a prayer. God is keeping you strong. I can't discuss this further, your heart felt words touched my heart. You are loved here Robin {{{{Hugs}}}}


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

Robin - Godspeed

I'm glad that you are back, and are hopefully on an upward swing. I read your comment here explaining where you've been, and honey, the good Lord sure gave you something to write about!

I know how the courts can be. I had been the Leave-it-to-beaver Mom for 12 years when my hubby (at the time) met a young girl at work and did everything in his power to start a new life without losing anything.

He made up some pretty colorful stories and the judge bought them, without ever questioning me or anyone in our lives. I knew nothing of it until the sheriff came one night and took my son.

Even after I was totally vindicated, the court guardian recommended that the boys stay with their Dad since they had already started school for the year as not to disrupt their academics.

But, my dear, all things are temporary. They were with their dad for one year. They fell apart. He had never been there for them; a work-a-holic and a cyber-sex attict he never had time for them. He had no idea how to raise them.

They came back by choice despite his efforts. It has taken years for the damage to dissipate, but they are doing great now; happy, settled, doing well in school, with a great group of friends.

They were eventually able to see him for what he really is. I tried to bite my tongue and succeeded for the most part, so they are healing. But, it takes time.

My only advise to you, is to fight the temptation to tell your son all the sorted details. Let him be a child. Let him love his Dad - even if his Dad doesn't deserve it. Kids need that. He will figure things out for himself eventually, and when he does, his mind and emotions will be ready for it.

Take care of yourself and stay clear of sketchy situations that can make you look bad. Yes, appearances are as important as what's real.

God Bless,


( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

Dear Jeannie...
Love is in the air, and your prayers are with me, this I know, and yes I will take this advice with Psalms 27, and I'll talk soon to you via mail...thank you from my heart and my little mans, too...Blessings, my friend...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

Dear Felicia...
Thank you, for sharing your story with me, I know I'm not alone. And wise words from a wise woman and you give me much inspiration and hope...I know in my heart, thing's will work out,
I know he will be back with me soon, it's just hard not to worry for his safety, but, my faith will pull me through and he and I will do great in time...time does heal.

Your last paragraph, don't worry, I won't hurt him with vicious words about his father, afterall
he is part of his father, to talk ugly of a parent is to talk ugly of the child...I could never do that, I would really like to see his father get well and clean of his addiction and pray he does...

Thanks Felicia, for just being here...Friends.


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

You are right... you'll be fine. : )


( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: September 27, 2005 )

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